Love, love, LOVE this ficlet, from start to finish! Dialogue like this is just made of Dru, and so pretty:
we’ll get stars tangled in our petticoats.”
And THIS line made me spit Dr. Pepper through my nose:
“Silly Spike,” she laughed. “It wasn’t real bombs, you know."
BwaHAAAA! Dumb me; I'd assumed that they were admiring the beauty of the fireworks in the normal human way...and then I saw "It wasn't real bombs" and realized that they were admiring the fireworks in the Addams Family way: by pretending that the castle was being torpedoed. XD BRILLIANT!
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Date: 2009-05-04 02:59 pm (UTC)we’ll get stars tangled in our petticoats.”
And THIS line made me spit Dr. Pepper through my nose:
“Silly Spike,” she laughed. “It wasn’t real bombs, you know."
BwaHAAAA! Dumb me; I'd assumed that they were admiring the beauty of the fireworks in the normal human way...and then I saw "It wasn't real bombs" and realized that they were admiring the fireworks in the Addams Family way: by pretending that the castle was being torpedoed. XD BRILLIANT!
*runs off to rec' it at Cold Dead Seed*
http://www.fuzzyshark.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=173296#173296
Would it be okay with you if I nominated it at some fanfic award sites?