I personally think their interactions would have a lot more sex in 'em. (Oh, yeah!) I'm working up to it, I swear. Very, very slowly.
*lol* Yeah, well, there's that. But I think you capture their personalities perfectly. I've not doubt that your smut muse will get there eventually. (Says the coward who only has two or three R-rated haiku out of 150.) And I'll be there to read it, baybee!
I think you conveyed it successfully; you can't help it when your audience reads a story after drinking two margaritas and is a little fuzzy on nuance. The nuance is still there! ;)
I really like that the notion of eating British soldiers and being seen as shirking his patriotic duty distresses Spike while Dru, who can see the scope of what's happening, will merrily slaughter soldiers of any stripe. I think you've nailed the contrast between them here.
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Date: 2008-11-19 03:19 pm (UTC)*lol* Yeah, well, there's that. But I think you capture their personalities perfectly. I've not doubt that your smut muse will get there eventually. (Says the coward who only has two or three R-rated haiku out of 150.) And I'll be there to read it, baybee!
I think you conveyed it successfully; you can't help it when your audience reads a story after drinking two margaritas and is a little fuzzy on nuance. The nuance is still there! ;)
I really like that the notion of eating British soldiers and being seen as shirking his patriotic duty distresses Spike while Dru, who can see the scope of what's happening, will merrily slaughter soldiers of any stripe. I think you've nailed the contrast between them here.